Peck

Joseph Bloedoorn teacherman16@comcast.net 5973201027286

ACTION ADVENTURE APOCALYPTIC SCI-FI

Contemporary

Seph Bloedoorn

Logline

An avian invasion threatens a troubled family’s survival. Three adult siblings - estranged - re-unite at their deceased parents' beach house. There they are besieged by birds gone berserk, led by giant killer penguins.

Genre

Action,Adventure,Apocalyptic,Sci-fi

Short Summary

A vulture kills a newborn baby. The story, picked up by a wire service, is the last item Miriam Segal reads before she's killed in a skiing accident, along with her husband, Stan. Their 3 adult children decide to visit their beach house one last time before putting it up for sale.


While sailing to safety aboard their brother-in-laws ketch, the Segals are offered assistance by a Coast Guard helicopter crew. Attacked from the air by gulls, skuas and gannets, and from the sea by giant penguins, the chopper is destroyed, the sailboat sunk, and only the children survive.

Setting

A fictional barrier island, Halcyon, modeled on the Outer Banks.

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain

Plot - Other Elements

Meaningful Message,Philosophical Questions

Mature Audience Themes

Extreme Violence, Language/Profanity,Substance Abuse

Main Character Details

Name: Izzy Segal

Age: mid-twenties

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Modest,Confident,Selfless,Skillful,Empathetic,Honorable,Strong Moral Code

Additional Character Details

Name: Maeve

Age: Early 30s

Gender: Female

Role: Skeptic

Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Charming,Complex,Confident,Engaging,Outspoken,Funny,Romantic,Sophisticated,Educated,Honorable,Gracious

Additional Character Details

Name: Sibyl

Age: mid-to-late 40s

Gender: Female

Role: logical

Key Traits: Aspiring,Underdog,Confident,Adventurous,Decisive,Outspoken,Blunt,Funny,Sarcastic,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code,Heroic

Additional Character Details

Name: Sam

Age: late 30s

Gender: Male

Role: antagonist

Key Traits: Masculine,Aggressive,Narcisstic,Confident,Decisive,Blunt,Skillful,Greedy,Educated,Sophisticated,Unapologetic

Development Pitch

It's D-Day for humanity, and the sleepy resort village of Halcyon is Omaha Beach. Nature has assigned the destruction of all Humankind to her feathered minions, and evolved a warrior with the perfect characteristics to lead the amphibious assault: Domitor Rex, the largest, fiercest, and farthest-ranging penguin the world has ever known. It's their bad luck that the adult Segal siblings - Sibyl, Sam, and Izzy - have come to town to arrange the sale of their recently-deceased parents' beach property at precisely the moment the avian invasion launches. The family's response in the face of certain destruction mirrors the contemporary human condition with chilling fidelity : it's fright, flight or fight on steroids! It's a story that stands squarely in the "Nature's Revenge" tradition.

About The Author

Harlem-born, Harvard-educated, my career arc includes years in law enforcement, decades in corporate communications, and years in public education. My previous screenwriting experience is largely in the non-theatrical realm, and includes micro-to-low-budget commercials, business-to-business informercials, and decision support videos for legislative or litigation applications. My one public tv credit, "The DIY Show," (10 episodes) was carried in over 300 markets.

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34,35-54,55+,13-17

Target Gender: Universal

Publishing Details

Hard Copy Available

No

WGA Number

2145590

Logline

An avian invasion threatens a troubled family’s survival. Three adult siblings - estranged - re-unite at their deceased parents' beach house. There they are besieged by birds gone berserk, led by giant killer penguins.

Short Summary

A vulture kills a newborn baby. The story, picked up by a wire service, is the last item Miriam Segal reads before she's killed in a skiing accident, along with her husband, Stan. Their 3 adult children decide to visit their beach house one last time before putting it up for sale.


While sailing to safety aboard their brother-in-laws ketch, the Segals are offered assistance by a Coast Guard helicopter crew. Attacked from the air by gulls, skuas and gannets, and from the sea by giant penguins, the chopper is destroyed, the sailboat sunk, and only the children survive.

FEEDBACK

It's D-Day for humanity, and the sleepy resort village of Halcyon is Omaha Beach. Nature has assigned the destruction of all Humankind to her feathered minions, and evolved a warrior with the perfect characteristics to lead the amphibious assault: Domitor Rex, the largest, fiercest, and farthest-ranging penguin the world has ever known. It's their bad luck that the adult Segal siblings - Sibyl, Sam, and Izzy - have come to town to arrange the sale of their recently-deceased parents' beach property at precisely the moment the avian invasion launches. The family's response in the face of certain destruction mirrors the contemporary human condition with chilling fidelity : it's fright, flight or fight on steroids! It's a story that stands squarely in the "Nature's Revenge" tradition.

About The Author

Harlem-born, Harvard-educated, my career arc includes years in law enforcement, decades in corporate communications, and years in public education. My previous screenwriting experience is largely in the non-theatrical realm, and includes micro-to-low-budget commercials, business-to-business informercials, and decision support videos for legislative or litigation applications. My one public tv credit, "The DIY Show," (10 episodes) was carried in over 300 markets.

Mature Audience Themes

Extreme Violence, Language/Profanity,Substance Abuse

Characters

Main Character

Name: Izzy Segal

Age: mid-twenties

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Modest,Confident,Selfless,Skillful,Empathetic,Honorable,Strong Moral Code

Character 1

Name: Maeve

Age: Early 30s

Gender: Female

Role: Skeptic

Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Charming,Complex,Confident,Engaging,Outspoken,Funny,Romantic,Sophisticated,Educated,Honorable,Gracious

Character 2

Name: Sibyl

Age: mid-to-late 40s

Gender: Female

Role: logical

Key Traits: Aspiring,Underdog,Confident,Adventurous,Decisive,Outspoken,Blunt,Funny,Sarcastic,Sophisticated,Strong Moral Code,Heroic

Character 3

Name: Sam

Age: late 30s

Gender: Male

Role: antagonist

Key Traits: Masculine,Aggressive,Narcisstic,Confident,Decisive,Blunt,Skillful,Greedy,Educated,Sophisticated,Unapologetic