All the F*cks I Cannot Give
Submision Type
book
Logline
Down and out mild mannered marketing man Kelly Carson learns how not giving a f*ck can be the path to self enlightenment.
Genre
Comedy,Funny,Romance
Short Summary
While sitting in an airport lounge in Los Angeles three weeks before Christmas, mild-mannered Kelly Carson is fired over the telephone by his spineless boss. After meeting a fiery free-spirited starlet in the airport, he ditches his plans to go home to Connecticut and escapes to Hawaii.
Setting
Hawaii, Chicago, New York
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Internal Journey/Rebirth
Plot - Other Elements
Coming of Age
Mature Audience Themes
Nudity, Language/Profanity
Main Character Details
Name: Kelly Carson
Age: 45
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Clumsy,Insecure,Modest,Obedient,Selfless,Funny
Additional Character Details
Name: Terri Flynn
Age: 45
Gender: Female
Role: Mentor
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aggressive,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Sexy,Outspoken,Skillful,Funny,Romantic,Seductive
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Genre
COMEDY, DRAMA
Brief
Kelly is a push over who finds out his freeloading wife is a lesbian and is fired by his crappy boss while waiting for his flight. He meets the beautiful actress,Terri, who invites him on her trip to Maui. Kelly begins to put himself and his needs first which opens his life up to exciting opportunities such as the publishing of his first book.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: FAIR
Pace: GOOD
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
Yes, the book profile accurately reflects the book.
Draw of Story
The tone of the story is very distinct. Kelly is a mild mannered individual who does not defend himself. He knows his wife is a lesbian and plays along with her desire to have an open marriage to keep the farce up for their parents. He is aware she takes advantage of him but still does her bidding. When he finally gets a break from her and his life is he able to reevaluate it and make changes.
Possible Drawbacks
This story goes in many directions. Kelly becomes more confident and writes his book. He becomes very successful. He also becomes involved in the swingers community. The story does not treat the LGBTQAI characters in a kind way. There are many nicknames for Kelly's wife that are derogatory terms that aren't necessary, especially when they come from supporting characters.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The hook is that Kelly breaks free from his mundane life to live the life he has never dreamed about. The story is very relatable because it shows a person making changes to live their life and not just survive. Most adults do not have life all figured out and there are periods of growth that happen with everyone.
Fanbase Potential
This could have a large fanbase but it would definitely be geared towards a more mature audience. The story is about someone who did everything right. Kelly has a beautiful wife, a nice house and a stable job. But Kelly is just going through the motions and when everything falls out from under him does he realize that he needs a change. He is almost forced to by a new companion, Terri, but it starts him on a new journey.
Awards Potential
This does not have awards potential. While this shows important moments in Kelly's life when he puts himself first, it is not a deep dive into human psyche. It is more surface level.
Envisioned Budget
MEDIUM BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
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What’s New About the Story
There is nothing truly original about the story except how Kelly finds himself confronted with the state of his life. He takes a spontaneous trip with a beautiful actress to Maui. She challenges him and he grows as a result. The story of a white man living a mundane life and circumstances forcing him to change is not unique. Some diversity in the characters would make this story more unique. Asian characters lack major representation in the media and this story would lend well to an Asian American as the main character.
Lead Characters
The lead character doesn't stand out which is the point of the story. But in the end, he is brave enough to make a change in his life to be happy.
Uniqueness of Story
This is not a rare gem but an entertaining story about adulthood and the choices we all make in life. The story can be improved with having a diverse cast. There are rich cultures that could be highlighted, respectfully, to add depth to the story.
Possible Formats
Film - Indie, Film - Streaming, Film - Studio, TV Series - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
WORK IN PROGRESS
Justification
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