Passport, please

GENRE
BIOGRAPHICAL ROMANCE ADVENTURE ACTION YOUNG ADULT
Core Theme
IMMIGRATION, INTERNAL JOURNEY, LOVE
TIME PERIOD
Contemporary
COMPARABLE TITLES
EMILY IN PARIS, TED LASSO, BORDER SECURITY, BORDER CONTROL:EUROPE
CHARACTER LIST
THEMIS: 35. A YOUNG BRAZILIAN IMMIGRANT FROM RIO DE JANEIRO TO THE UK. ADORABLE, INTELLIGENT, AND FUNNY.
BALDER. 38. THEMI'S SUPERVISOR AND MENTOR, AN OFFICER AT THE LONDON AIRPORT. GRUMPY BUT ALSO KIND.
MICHAEL. THEMIS' FIRST MENTOR IN THE BRITISH CIVIL SERVICE. HE HAD A CRUSH ON HER AND HELPED HER TO GET A JOB AS AN IMMIGRATION OFFICER.
MATT. A POLICE OFFICER WHO BECOMES THEMIS’S HUSBAND.
ISIS. 18. A PASSENGER FROM BRAZIL PURSUING HAVING AN ABORTION IN THE UK.
Logline
It is a book of stories that recounts the adventures of Themis, a Brazilian beach lover turned United Kingdom immigration officer, who draws back the curtain on the British immigration service to present her unique view on its inner workings and behind-the-scenes activity at border control.
Target Audiences
Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+
Target Gender: Universal
Setting
London, UK.
Based on a True Story
Yes
Publishing Details
Status: Yes: self-published
Publisher: Visto a Vista Ltd
Year Published: 2020
Starting Description
The main character, Themis, arrives in the UK and gets stopped by airport security who inspect her luggage. This happened soon after September 11th and changes her life completely. She goes on to build her life in the UK, from working for McDonald's until she gets a position at the airport.
Ending Description
Themis became a very successful border control officer and meets a police officer who helps her rebuild her life.
Group Specific
immigrants/immigration
Hard Copy Available
Yes
ISBN
978-1-8380161-7-3
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Plot - Other Elements
Happy Ending,Meaningful Message
Plot - Premise
Internal Journey/Rebirth
Main Character Details
Name: Themis
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Charming,Confident,Decisive,Empathetic,Romantic
Additional Character Details
Name: Balder
Age: 40
Gender: Male
Role: Mentor
Key Traits: Aspiring,Aggressive,Confident,Engaging,Educated,Leader,Patriotic,Skillful,Sarcastic,Strong Moral Code
Additional Character Details
Name: Various passengers
Age: multiple
Gender: Other
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Aggressive,Criminal
Additional Character Details
The author has not yet written this
Genre
ROMANCE, DRAMA
Brief
Themis is leaving behind her life in Brazil to start a new chapter in the UK after facing harsh experiences (her best friend died in a car accident, and her husband cheated on her, as we later find out). When she arrives at the London airport, she gets stopped by security who inspects her luggage -- that moment changes her life. As she adjusts to the new culture, she finds a job as a supermarket checkout operator to a British civil servant. Mistreated and prejudiced, she quits and starts working as an assistant in the Tax Administration Department. A few years later, she gets a job as an immigration officer, working for Immigration and Border Control at the airport. Themis becomes a very successful border control officer, encountering many people with unique motivations and dealing with ethical dilemmas along the way. She also meets a police officer who helps her rebuild her life.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: FAIR
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: GOOD
Pace: FAIR
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
Yes, it is accurate.
Draw of Story
The narrative combines exciting storylines based on the author's real-life experiences and challenges as an immigrant. Through Themis, the audience gets to see behind the screens that separate passengers from an airport's inner workings. The general public gets a peek into areas usually out of reach, such as the watch house, the "pan,” and the holding room. It is interesting to learn about the procedures adopted to refuse entry to those who do not meet the strict criteria for admission in a country and common tricks used to try to fool an immigration officer.
Possible Drawbacks
As fascinating as they are, some flashbacks cut into the flow of the story, such as when she recalls her grand-grandparents immigrating from Italy to Brazil or when she remembers her previous job taking customer calls. These stories are overly detailed, and some are irrelevant for developing the narrative. In addition, Themis' judgment of Isis, a young Brazilian seeking an abortion in the UK, is unnecessary. Before she even meets the girl, Themis states she will refuse her entrance without explaining why.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
Topics such as immigration are in the spotlight. There’s a potential to make people sympathize with the diversity of characters and their motivations, experiences, and challenges of leaving a life behind to survive in a new country. Themis takes the audience behind the scenes of the British immigration system, which is rarely seen in movies or TV shows.
Fanbase Potential
This is not a story for fanbases. However, Themis is a charismatic character, and she has an exciting life as an immigrant. This hot topic can make people sympathize with the diversity of characters and their motivations, experiences, and challenges. It's also a story about belief, desire, and the ability to make their dreams come true, which allow the audience to cheer for them.
Awards Potential
The immigration issue is constantly in the headlines, and the Awards have been giving more attention to diversity over the years. Although this story is not about refugee crisis, there is the opportunity to explore some accounts as a drama or comedy that could attract Awards attention.
Envisioned Budget
LOW BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
EMILY IN PARIS, TED LASSO, BORDER SECURITY, BORDER CONTROL:EUROPE
What’s New About the Story
Themis takes audiences behind the scenes of the airport's inner workings, and the public gets a glimpse into areas that are usually off-limits. Her job involves a strict training procedure and naturally requires her to strictly adhere to the guidelines of the British immigration regulations and balance empathy since she is also an immigrant. The contradictions in her new life stand out to her: an immigrant policing immigrants. Comedy, drama, and romance all have their place in this story.
Lead Characters
Themis is charismatic, and her life as an immigrant is fascinating. While she understands that her job is to enforce the law, she cannot help but feel compassion for her fellow immigrants. As she watches dreams of a brighter future shattered and feels sad about it, she is equally disappointed by how people are willing to lie and deceive. Balder is also an interesting character, grumpy while being adorable at the same time. He provides excellent comedy relief in this story.
Uniqueness of Story
Although there are some reality shows and documentaries about border control at airports, the inner workings of immigration are rarely explored in movies or TV shows, especially considering the human aspect. This story gives room for fictional interpretations of current circumstances, exploring diversity and reaching different audiences.
Possible Formats
Film: Studio, Indie, Streaming TV Series: Network, Cable, Limited Run / Mini-Series, Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
It's unique and exciting to learn more about what goes on behind an immigration system. Bringing together Themis experiences and passenger stories can make for a great combination. Creating fictional interpretations of real-world situations offers an opportunity to examine diversity and reach all kinds of audiences. Some flashbacks, though, as fascinating as they are, cut into the flow of the story, so it would need an improvement on how to approach it.
Brief
Themis is leaving behind her life in Brazil to start a new chapter in the UK after facing harsh experiences (her best friend died in a car accident, and her husband cheated on her, as we later find out). When she arrives at the London airport, she gets stopped by security who inspects her luggage -- that moment changes her life. As she adjusts to the new culture, she finds a job as a supermarket checkout operator to a British civil servant. Mistreated and prejudiced, she quits and starts working as an assistant in the Tax Administration Department. A few years later, she gets a job as an immigration officer, working for Immigration and Border Control at the airport. Themis becomes a very successful border control officer, encountering many people with unique motivations and dealing with ethical dilemmas along the way. She also meets a police officer who helps her rebuild her life.
What We Liked
Immigration is a hot topic. People would easily sympathize with the diversity of characters and their motivations, experiences, and challenges. The main character, Themis, is also an immigrant starting a new life in a new country. Ironically, her task is to decide whether immigrants should be allowed entry into the UK to begin a new life. She has quickly acquired a reputation for turning people away. She takes the audience behind the scenes of the British immigration system, which is rarely seen in movies or TV shows.
Film: As a movie, Passport Please would be better served by focusing more on Themis’s story, rather than passengers, since there would not be enough time to develop it fully. A flashback to her life (before getting to the UK) could be triggered by two or three passengers and their motivations. Although there are some reality shows and documentaries about border control at airports, the inner workings of immigration are rarely explored in movies or TV shows, especially considering the human aspect.
TV: As a series, Passport Please has many characters and great stories to be explored. There could be an episode for each passenger and their reason for visiting the UK, highlighting diversity and reaching different audiences. Through flashbacks, it is possible to explore insight into the characters’ motivations and Themis's reasons to decide their fate. Comedy, drama, and romance all have their place in this story.
Key points:
1. Immigration
2. Dreams come true
3. Happy ending
4. Meaningful message
5. Low budget
Synopsis
It was a September morning in 2001 when Themis decided to change her life. She left behind her life in Brazil to start a new chapter in the UK after facing harsh experiences (her best friend died in a car accident, and her husband cheated on her, as we later find out).
When she arrives at the London airport, several armed police officers in the airport make the place look like a battlefield. The world was shaken to the core by the attacks on the World Trade Center in the United States. While the customs officer proceeded with his inspection of her belongings, she observed how the airport workers went about their tasks. Something about this environment fascinated her.
It has been years since that moment in the airport changed her life. Now, after six long weeks of a training course, she has secured her position as an immigration officer, working for Immigration and Border Control at the airport. Balder is her supervisor and mentor for the first few weeks and shows her how to recognize liars trying to get into the country illegally. On her first day working at the airport, she had to deal with a Brazilian guy lying about his purposes. In her first case, she refused his entrance.
The passenger's stories remind her of the time she first moved to the UK. She had to adjust to the new culture and face prejudice from her former bosses while serving at a fast-food restaurant in a shopping center and as a supermarket checkout operator to a British civil servant. Humiliated, worthless, not able to defend herself from injustices due to the language barrier. Three years later, though, she successfully joined the civil service and worked in the government department as an assistant in the Tax Administration Department. She jumped straight into her dream job as an immigration officer.
To get to the airport, she had to learn how to drive. At one point, she ran out of gas in the middle of the road. Cops stopped to check her out, and one of them was a handsome police officer; he gave her his number in case she needed anything. Days later, the police officer shows up as a trainee volunteer at immigration control in the airport. His name was Matt, and he wanted to see Themis again. Once they got along, they started dating.
At this point, Themis was already a highly successful border control officer, encountering many people with unique motivations and dealing with ethical dilemmas along the way. One of the passengers, Isis, was a young Brazilian girl seeking a legal abortion procedure in the UK. Themis suspects that something isn't right and finds out that the girl's fiance forced her to have an abortion against her will. She prevented Isis from entering the country and managed to send her home safely. Isis expressed gratitude to Themis for saving her child. A few years later, Themis got married to Matt, and they now have a son.