The Commandment

Book Cover


The Future

Anna Kittrell

  • -
  • Views


An eighteen-year-old woman faces extermination when her body rejects a mandatory God-erasing vaccine.


Action, Apocalyptic, Drama, Political, Romance, Sci-Fi, Religious, Suspense / Thriller,

Short Summary

Ten years ago, Briar’s body rejected a government mandated vaccine to erase God from the mind. Days from her eighteenth birthday, she remains nonresponsive to the injections. By order of the Commandment, adulthood means institutionalization and death unless she becomes a laboratory test subject.

Briar is flown to the laboratory of Lukas Stone to become the test subject for a serum that permanently dissolves God from the brain. But instead of freeing Briar's mind from a prison of religious lies, Lukas finds himself turning to a god he never believed existed, to save the woman he now loves.


Oklahoma, Nevada, Montana

Based on a True Story


Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain

Plot - Other Elements

Philosophical Questions, Coming of Age, Meaningful Message, Twist, Happy Ending

Mature Audience Themes

Information not completed

Main Character Details

Name: Briar Lee

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Strong Moral Code, Underdog, Aspiring, Engaging, Insecure, Religious, Selfless, Charming, Decisive, Empathetic, Faithful, Honorable

Additional Character Details

Name: Lukas Stone

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Role: Logical

Key Traits: Complex, Educated, Leader, Skillful, Visionary, Sophisticated, Strong Moral Code, Aspiring, Confident, Decisive, Honorable, Perseverance

Additional Character Details

Name: Reid Laughlin

Age: 25

Gender: Female

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Blunt, Narcissistic, Secretive, Aggressive, Crazy, Decisive, Greedy, Manipulative, Power-hungry, Seductive, Beautiful, Desperate, Outspoken, Sophisticated, Adventurous, Charming, Confident, Educated, Sarcastic, Sexy, Skillful, Unapologetic, Villainous

Additional Character Details

Name: Caster Stone

Age: 29

Gender: Male

Role: Antagonist

Key Traits: Aggressive, Manipulative, Narcissistic, Unapologetic, Confident, Educated, Power-hungry, Secretive, Blunt, Criminal, Desperate, Villainous, Sophisticated, Complex, Crazy, Decisive, Greedy, Masculine, Outspoken

Development Pitch

About The Author

Target Audiences

Age: 18-34

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: with a Publisher

Publisher: Pelican Ventures LLC

Year Published: 2018

Hard Copy Available



Information not completed