The Retreat
Logline
Belinda is an event planner who picked up a stalker, meaning to do her harm. Carrick is a client, who senses something deeper in the woman he meets. He has found his soulmate, if he can protect her from her unseen stalker.
Genre
Suspense/Thriller,Romance
Short Summary
Belinda is doing a final wedding before her much needed vacation, until her boss shows up, waylaying it and asking her to take a meeting with new potential clients from New York. She is really stressed out, but for a chance out of weddings, she is willing to try something new.
After Belinda's stalker is caught, Carrick and Belinda work on building their relationship until his father proclaims Carrisk is to be married to someone else. Belinda believes the rumor and runs, forcing Carrick to find her to explain and tell her the truth about his love for her.
Setting
Minnesota, New York
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Other
Plot - Other Elements
Happy Ending
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Main Character Details
Name: Belinda
Age: late 20's or early 30's
Gender: Female
Role: Logical
Key Traits: Confident,Sexy,Decisive,Skillful,Selfless,Charming,Gracious,Honorable,Strong Moral Code
Additional Character Details
Name: Carrick
Age: early 30's
Gender: Male
Role: Logical
Key Traits: Masculine,Aspiring,Charming,Complex,Confident,Sexy,Decisive,Engaging,Skillful,Honorable,Romantic,Heartthrob,Heroic,Educated,Seductive,Strong Moral Code,Leader
Additional Character Details
Name: The ghosts
Age: mid to late 30's and 40's
Gender: Lgbt
Role: logical
Key Traits: Adventurous,Masculine,Badass,Aggressive,Complex,Confident,Patriotic,Decisive,Faithful,Heroic,Educated,Honorable,Leader
Additional Character Details
The author has not yet written this
Development Pitch
The Retreat is about over coming challenges, great and deep friendships and love. Although Belinda was overly stressed out from over working, she made the decision to take on an event that would propel her into the arena of planning she wants to go. Carrick finds Belinda infuriating at first, but then sees the drive and ambition within her, which motivates her to be the best at what she does. Even though he was betrayed by his ex-wife, Carrick is able to open his heart to Belinda. He sets out to help and protect her along with men from her past that he proclaims are shadows or ghosts. Belinda and Carrick’s relationship is strained at first with her being stressed out. Then her stalker adds to their tension. They just want a chance to find out if what they have discovered together, can become something special and lasting. The characters are down-to-earth on the surface, yet deep and complex as you get to know them better. This would make an interesting movie or small screen movie because there is the romance yet the suspense to keep viewers intrigued to watch as the next scene unfolds. Also, if it were followed up with the other stories I have written about the ghosts, it could make a compelling start to a series.