Fly Girl

GENRE
SUSPENSE / THRILLER YOUNG ADULT WAR ACTION ADVENTURE DRAMA HISTORICAL FICTION
Core Theme
BRAVERY
TIME PERIOD
Contemporary
COMPARABLE TITLES
CAPTAIN MARVEL, THE AERONAUTS
CHARACTER LIST
• RAWLEY WEST: 28. LEAD. BRAVE AND BADASS.
• RIP: 30S, RAWLEY'S EX-BOYFRIEND
• GIL: 70S, RAWLEY'S GODFATHER
• SALLY: 50S, RAWLEY'S MOM
• BUD: 50S, RAWLEY'S FATHER
• DAIKI MASOGI: 80S, VILLAIN
Logline
This story is about a young woman who follows her fathers path to become a Navy fighter pilot. Later she leaves the Navy to fly for the CIA and discovers several secrets about her family and lost love. She eventually becomes embroiled in a worldwide hunt for lost weapon of mass destruction.
Target Audiences
Age: 18-34
Target Gender: Universal
Setting
Montana, Alaska, Arizona, Afghanistan, Philippines, Havana Cuba, Key West Florida
Based on a True Story
No
Publishing Details
Status: Yes: self-published
Publisher: Create Space
Year Published: 2018
Starting Description
The story begins with Rawley West making her final flight as a deployed Navy fighter pilot. From there she goes to the CIA and during training discovers her father is her new employer. While she is the CIA flight training program we learn many aspects of her early life.
Ending Description
The story ends with Rawley West coming face to face with the reality that women are too often minimized. In the end she is the only person who can solve the crisis.
Group Specific
Information not completed
Hard Copy Available
Yes
ISBN
ISBN-10: 1548622885
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Plot - Other Elements
Other
Plot - Premise
Overcoming Monster/Villain
Main Character Details
Name: Rawley West
Age: 28
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Aggressive,Complex,Sexy,Patriotic,Heroic,Honorable,Leader
Additional Character Details
Name: C. Ripley McGuin
Age: 28
Gender: Male
Role: Sidekick
Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Aggressive,Masculine,Sexy,Patriotic,Confident,Heroic,Leader,Secretive
Additional Character Details
Name: Gil Adams
Age: 72
Gender: Male
Role: sidekick
Key Traits: Adventurous,Masculine,Confident
Additional Character Details
The author has not yet written this
Genre
ACTION, THRILLER, DRAMA, WAR
Brief
Female Navy fighter pilot leaves the service to join the CIA and discovers that her parents have been a part of the CIA the whole time. On her first mission she rescues her undercover ex-boyfriend who she had thought was missing but was really in the CIA. They go on a mission to recover a WMD from the Vietnam War, save the day, and end up together.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: GOOD
Characterization: FAIR
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: FAIR
Pace: GOOD
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: FAIR
Accuracy of Book Profile
Book profile works!
Draw of Story
A badass female fighter pilot who joins the CIA and uncovers a bunch of family secrets? I was intrigued from the very start.
Possible Drawbacks
There was a lot of over-explaining of technical elements of planes and flying that weren't necessary to the main plot of the story and can easily be cut out.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY RELIES A LITTLE BIT ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
A female fighter pilot in the Navy joins the CIA and uncovers family secrets while racing to recover a Weapon of Mass Destruction lost in the Vietnam War. Action, adventure, a strong female lead, romance, mystery, and even history and international relations.
Fanbase Potential
This could definitely have a large fanbase within fans of action movies, warfare movies, and strong female leads.
Awards Potential
I could see some technical awards being given.
Envisioned Budget
LARGE BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
MASH, CAPTAIN MARVEL (TONALLY)
What’s New About the Story
It has a female main character who is a fighter pilot. The other characters could be fleshed out a bit more in order to continue to increase the uniqueness.
Lead Characters
Rawley is brave, incredibly talented, and still feminine. She's empathetic and smart and she uses her skills wisely.
Uniqueness of Story
This could be a rare gem if the main story was sharpened and the characters were a bit more fleshed out.
Possible Formats
Film - Studio, Film - Streaming
Analyst Recommendation
CONSIDER
Justification
This is a unique story that would easily get a big audience with its wide appeal.
Brief
Rawley West is a Navy fighter pilot who leaves the service after getting offered a mysterious job in the CIA. Upon taking it, she learns secrets about her family, and realizes that she may have joined the family business as an agent. She soon becomes embroiled in a quest to find and capture a weapon of mass destruction.
What We Liked
- This story has a unique female main character who isn't the typical magazine editor or photographer or saleswoman--she's a fighter pilot, and she's amazing at it. She is truly the hero of this story and plays second fiddle to no other character, even though many are talented and incredible in their own right.
- This would be a thrilling adventure film that would keep audiences on the edge of their seats and make their hearts race.
- As a television show, this would be a standout in the market as it would feature a female main character who is a fighter pilot. Audiences would tune in weekly to watch Rawley and the team race to find the missing weapon.
- Key points: Female protagonist; Unique setting; Exciting action scenes; Romance; Strong family bonds.
Synopsis
Rawley West is a Navy fighter pilot who has just been offered a secretive job with the CIA. Unable to resist the chance at even more adventure, Rawley agrees to leave the service and join the CIA. Once she starts training, she's surprised to learn that it's not only led by her father, but a group of men who she's known her entire life. Her father, Bud, explains that he's sorry for the secrecy, but he and her mother, Sally, wanted it to be her own choice. Rawley trains with her father and learns that her mother is one of the best sharpshooters in the country.
Rawley is soon tasked with her first assignment--her godfather, Gil, is getting older, and some of their colleagues worry he may be too old to fly missions. Rawley is given the job of deciding if she should replace him or not. While flying with Gil, Rawley judges that he is still able to fly and tells him that he can continue to fly as long as he wants. Rawley's first official mission is to rescue an undercover agent and his prisoner, but things go awry when their plane is shot down. Rawley acts fast and is able to save both the agent and the prisoner, and leaves the scene with only a minor wound in her leg. However, she soon learns that the undercover agent is her ""missing"" ex-boyfriend, Rip. Rip apologizes and explains that he got recruited for the CIA while they were still in college and wasn't able to tell her.
Rawley and Rip are assigned to be a part of a team recovering a weapon of mass destruction that has been missing since the Vietnam war. First, they go to Cuba, where they find that it has just been taken. One of Rip's old sailing friends invites Rip to join him in a sailing race from Cuba to Key West, Florida, and Rip invites Rawley to meet him there. In Florida, they discover that the person in current possession of the WMD is Daiki Masogi, an elderly survivor of the Nagasaki bomb. Rawley learns that there is a Truman family reunion at the Truman House in Key West that evening and realizes that it's where Masogi is planning the attack. Rip is shot, and Rawley takes care of him and then finds the man with the WMD and guns him down before he can set it off. Rawley and Rip get back together.