Grey Blue Water

Daniel M. Taylor

Book Cover

GENRE

ACTION ADVENTURE DRAMA WAR RELIGIOUS

    Core Theme

    TRYING TO FIND ONE'S PLACE AND PURPOSE AMID TURMOIL.

    TIME PERIOD

    19th Century

    COMPARABLE TITLES

    DEADWOOD

    CHARACTER LIST

    JOHN: 24+. LEAD. BRAVE, HANDSOME, KIND, RELIGIOUS, ADVENTUROUS..

    ANGELICA: 16-18. JOHN'S ROMANTIC INTEREST ALTHOUGH SHE'S NEVER FIT IN HIS WORLD.

    ISAAC: 60S-80S. JOHN'S FATHER WHO WANTS HIS SON TO PROSPER AND SENDS HIM INTO PLACES UNKNOWN TO FIND HIS FORTUNE.

    YANCY: 40S-60S. THE DRIVER OF JOHN'S COACH AND A FLAMBOYANT SALESMAN.

    JANIE: 20S. JOHN'S WIFE WHO WAITS FOR HIM.

    BROTHER CHALCAS: 40S-60S. A MONK ALONG THE ROAD WHO GIVES JOHN BIBLICALLY-BASED ADVICE.

    Logline

    The US Navy's first hospital ship, USS Red Rover, built/repaired at the end of the Civil War and it's builders experience during the aftermath of the burning of the Steamship Sultana. Largest loss of life in military history on the Mississippi River.

    Target Audiences

    Age: 35-54,18-34,55+

    Target Gender: Universal

    Setting

    Sparta, Tennessee, Montgomery County, Texas, New Orleans, LA

    Based on a True Story

    Yes

    Publishing Details

    Status: Yes: with a Publisher

    Publisher: Brighton Publishing

    Year Published: 2013

    Starting Description

    John Douglas Taylor feels exiled to Texas by his father, Isaac Taylor. John Taylor was sent to Texas by his father in order to retain land grants from Stephen Austin. John was placed in jeopardy during the next 6 years while in Texas as the country was in transition from independence to statehood

    Ending Description

    John Taylor spent years in Texas establishing land grant and gaining patents only to lose his fortune after the Civil War. He assisted in the aftermath of the Sultana disaster near Memphis, Tennessee. John freed slaves of his father Isaac.

    Group Specific

    Sparta, Tennessee and Houston, Texas, US Navy, Department of Defense

    Hard Copy Available

    No

    ISBN

    B00FN8F4LO

    Mature Audience Themes

    Extreme Violence

    Plot - Other Elements

    Happy Ending,Meaningful Message

    Plot - Premise

    Internal Journey/Rebirth,Quest,Tragedy

    Main Character Details

    Name: John Douglas Taylor

    Age: 40

    Gender: Male

    Role: Logical

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Modest,Obedient,Empathetic,Outspoken,Gracious,Honorable,Strong Moral Code,Charming,Confident,Faithful,Romantic,Heartthrob

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Isaac Taylor

    Age: 65

    Gender: Male

    Role: Antagonist

    Key Traits: Aspiring,Badass,Villainous,Confident,Patriotic,Religious,Outspoken,Leader,Educated,Narcisstic,Aggressive,Adventurous,Decisive,Skillful,Greedy

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Frances Elizabeth Janie Price

    Age: 35

    Gender: Female

    Role: emotional

    Key Traits: Complex,Empathetic,Engaging,Faithful,Romantic,Educated,Honorable,Secretive,Skillful,Decisive,Sexy,Gracious

    Additional Character Details

    The author has not yet written this

    Genre

    ACTION, DRAMA, POLITICS, WAR

    Brief

    John moves to Texas to claim free land before the Civil War. He meets a beautiful Mexican named Angelica whom he'd like to be with, but can't because of his wealthy family. John sets up his farms and tries his hand at piloting steamships and then has his own built, but it's conscripted by the Confederacy and ends up a floating hospital. John returns home to his wife and two children.

    Overall Rating

    FAIR

    Point of View

    THIRD PERSON

    Narrative Elements

    Authors Writing Style: FAIR

    Characterization: FAIR

    Commerciality: FAIR

    Franchise Potential: FAIR

    Pace: FAIR

    Premise: FAIR

    Structure: FAIR

    Theme: FAIR

    Accuracy of Book Profile

    The logline only reflects the end of the story.

    Draw of Story

    American Southern history.

    Possible Drawbacks

    There are many details of peoples' land, business deals, and relationships that are dull and distract from the story. These should be removed.

    Use of Special Effects

    THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

    Primary Hook of Story

    The authenticity of its portrayal of life during that time.

    Fanbase Potential

    No.

    Awards Potential

    No.

    Envisioned Budget

    MEDIUM BUDGET

    Similar Films/TV Series

    DEADWOOD

    What’s New About the Story

    It's unique in its details of business dealings and land holdings, as well different aspects of life at the time. It could be more unique if it used all of these reprinted documents as part of the story instead of distracting asides.

    Lead Characters

    John is fearless in a land and during a time in which he should be afraid.

    Uniqueness of Story

    Not a rare gem as it s. It skips over the most exciting things about the period - the Native American problems and the Civil War. It should include some Native American perspectives and what the characters were doing during the war -and how they were affected these events.

    Possible Formats

    Film: Studio

    Analyst Recommendation

    WORK IN PROGRESS

    Justification

    There are only events and documents, and hardly and feelings or emotions. There are very dramatic things occurring but there isn't much in the story of how people are affected besides some political arguments by non-characters.

    Tips for Improvement

    A plot and a story that illustrate the effects of war, death and politics on these different, people most of whom are at odds which each other over an issue - slavery - which the protagonist is intimately familiar with.

    Brief

    John's father has sent him into Texas to build ranches. Along the way, John meets a Mexican woman with whom he has a romantic connection. He builds his ranches then goes on to pilot steamships in the rivers. The Civil War breaks out and John is a Rebel, but survives and finds his way back to his family.

    What We Liked

    John Taylor's father has sent him on a mission, from his comfortable life in Tennessee to wild Texas where he can get free land. His journey there is a dangerous one, and he encounters many different characters including a lovely Mexican girl. While John works hard to build his life in Texas, he's surrounded by tumultuous politics and is far from the woman he marries and his children. The Civil War begins, and John's new life as a steamboat pilot gets overturned by the Confederacy and loses everything he has. These are all dramatic life events set against a time period rife with conflict - some of the worst in American history - and it's fascinating to see how the characters will navigate these historic times.

    The vistas and landscapes of the old west have always been attractive to moviegoers and this story has all that and more. There are riverboats and plantations, and all the drama and strife therein. Also, there is a man trying to fulfill his destiny against the odds that takes us from one interesting locale to another as he navigates familiar yet foreign environs. John wants to give himself and his family a solid life, and it's interesting to watch the decisions he makes in his quest for the American dream.

    Key points:
    The old West
    A driven protagonist
    A country at war with itself
    Scenic vistas
    The cheap price of life in the past

    Synopsis

    John Taylor is riding in a stagecoach and stuffed in a seat next to the mail in antebellum Texas.
    He’s on his way to Austin to do some land business. He thinks back to when his grandfather and brother drowned in a sinkhole pond in Tennessee. He recalls his mother and sisters’ screams. His mother had two more sons after, Thomas and Isaac. As a boy, John read anything he could and would pretend he was Odysseus. The driver of the coach is a dandy named Yancy, and his gunner is named Jack and he and John have a friendly conversation and talk about the dangers of Native Americans. John finds out Yancy deals in Absinthe and there is some in the carriage. He’s startled by a monk who offers lots of life advice - and John meets Brother Chalcas. They eat together and he offers even more advice. John goes back to where Yancy is on a makeshift stage in a white suit preaching about the curative powers of his Absinthe to the locals. There’s even a Mexican girl costumed and painted in green. John is attracted to her. She spends the night with John, who tells Jack that he didn’t have sex because he’s saving himself for marriage. The girl, Angelica, accompanies them to Austin for another Absinthe show. They stop at a town and John shoots a Mexican in the foot for calling Angelica a slur. A man named Tom makes John pay him for shooting his worker, then Tom tells him war stories. They have another Absinthe sale then head for Austin. Angelica worries that her father will miss her and feels duped into going all the way to Austin. She really likes John and asks him to take her home but they can barely communicate from the language barrier. She tells him she’s a virgin. They arrive in Austin and there is a standoff between locals and Texas Rangers who want to move the Texas archives.

    John sleeps next to a cleaned-up Angelica and goes to the land office in the morning where he presents a letter of introduction and is told how much land he is to receive. He lies, saying he’s married, but it works, and John is pleased with how it goes. He uses Angelica as his “wife.” On the way back, their horses are traded for mules and they encounter a bad storm. John returns Angelica to her grateful family and offers them employment on his new ranch.

    John arrives at the home of Jacob and Kathleen Shannon, who inform him that John’s slaves and animals were sent to his land to begin construction. He gets a letter from his father informing him that a lot of people are sick from animals that died in the cold and polluted the drinking water. Two years later, and his ranch is operational, and Angelica and her family have arrived to start a saddle business on John’s land. They are happy to see each other and John is still tempted by Angelica and wonders what his hometown and family would think if he were to marry her. He endeavors to learn how to pilot riverboats and own his own one day. He was in a boating accident one night and spent the night in the freezing Mississippi. John runs into Jack and Yancy, who have Tandy Walker from the Land Management office who wants to inspect John’s lands. John is nervous and tells Angelica’s father that he pretended to be married to Angelica, but he misinterprets this and thinks John actually intends on marrying her. By the time Tandy arrives, John is high on opiates and whiskey for his aching head, but Tandy finds out about his ruse and fines him $2000.00. Angelica is very embarrassed, and John tells her he is promised to a woman in Tennessee, which is another lie.

    John meets Janie, his brother’s sister-in-law, at a wedding - and they go on to aggressively court each other through letters. Jane and her pregnant sister Helen talk about John’s proposal to Jane the last time he visited. Jane’s family is wealthy from gold. She is excited to marry John. When they do finally marry, the event goes well and their family and friends weep and cheer. The first locomotive comes to town and astounds everyone because few have seen them before. John and Janie ride home in the new contraption. John leaves his wife and new son Isaac at home a lot while he tries to make money with a borrowed riverboat. He is lonely a lot, and constantly asking his father for money. His father writes back that he is in bad health but can loan him some money. Little Isaac dies and John comes home, although not in time for his burial. He and Jane mourn. They try to give two of their older slaves their freedom, but they don’t want it because they are too old to go anywhere else and only have the clothes on their backs. John’s father dies and John has a ship built for himself. Called the Steamer Red Rover, he puts his land up for collateral and gets investors. One night in Louisville, he gets drunk and almost gets taken aboard a ship that kidnaps men and boys into slave labor, then is attacked by a gang of youths. The city is in turmoil over politics and the issues of immigration. John is transported by mule cart to the steamer where his brother in law is on.

    John gathers his investors and the new captain of his steamer - Captain Strong - and they sign the contract to build her. Back home, Janie has 4 year old John Jr. and a baby daughter named Annie. The Confederacy conscripts John’s steamer for $20,000.00. The war begins, the war ends. John’s steamer became a hospital ship. He fought for the Rebels but is now trading jovial war stories with Union soldiers. They see one of the other ships called the Sultana and are afraid it will be fired upon by a torpedo from another ship. Its boiler ends up exploding due to a coal bomb tossed by Abe, and men and machinery are blown into the water. John’s ship can’t take on any survivors and hundreds burn and drown. They release their lifeboats for whomever can get to them and signal for help. It is as hellish as it gets. The next morning another ship rescues who remains, while John’s ship heads up river to deliver its cargo. John’s family survived economically because of their steamer business, but many farmers went under without free labor and northerners came down to take advantage of the southerner’s defeat.

    About The Author

    Dan’s extensive domestic and international travel and particularly his work with the poor in Southeast Asia have enabled him to amass a fortune in literary thoughts on and experiences of the human spirit. His life has focused upon adventure and a desire to lead and to comfort those in need. The human desire to endure and expect the unexpected is his literary style and lifelong passion. Dan and his wife live in Manassas, Virginia.