The Captains and The Kings
Logline
David O’Neill is suffering a terminal illness. His wife Caitlin has organized a family gathering. It will be the last Father’s day together. Caitlin’s future is unsure and David is dealing with pain from the past. For years he has distanced his daughters and finally words must be said.
Genre
Comedy,Drama,Family
Short Summary
David O’Neill suffers leukaemia. Their last Father’s day together is planned. His three daughters attend; Catherine and twins, Dawn and Therese. A stranger, Peter, arrives to seek answers about his own father. David invites him to the gathering and also plans a place setting for his dead son Paul.
Paul died from an accident with the twins. The twins believe David is placing Paul to punish them. The gathering occurs and Catherine fights Peter who runs out. The twins turn on David who begs their forgiveness for shouting at them after Paul’s funeral. David soon dies. All reconcile.
Setting
Place: Kempsey, New South Wales, Australia; Time: 1968
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Internal Journey/Rebirth
Plot - Other Elements
Happy Ending,Philosophical Questions
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Main Character Details
Name: Catherine O’Neill
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Complex,Confident,Faithful,Insecure,Outspoken,Unapologetic
Additional Character Details
Name: Peter Schelling
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Role: Antagonist
Key Traits: Funny,Charming,Complex,Confident,Decisive,Engaging,Educated,Blunt,Outspoken,Sophisticated,Unapologetic
Additional Character Details
Name: David O’Neill
Age: 49
Gender: Male
Role: emotional
Key Traits: Aspiring,Charming,Complex,Engaging,Faithful,Gracious,Honorable,Modest,Selfless
Additional Character Details
Name: Caitlin O’Neill
Age: 47
Gender: Female
Role: sidekick
Key Traits: Charming,Complex,Empathetic,Engaging,Faithful,Gracious,Modest,Selfless
Development Pitch
This would make a great film as it is about Fathers. Vulnerable, beautiful, misunderstood, loving, supportive and sometimes unwittingly hurting fathers. This story works because I sat at the back of the theatre each night it played and watched women reach for tissues from their bag at the major emotional encounter in the last act. It connects. It is also about Love. The love of family. The palliative love of a wife for her dying husband. The love of daughters for their father as they question how they have measured up in his eyes. The love of a father for his daughters which although awkwardly unexpressed is unconditional. The friendship of strangers who find they share an interest in poetry. And also romantic love between a woman and a man, initially strangers who endure conflict before resolution. The scenes have a cinematic style and the pointed, amusing and often moving dialogue expresses the characters’ love, disappointment and eventual reconciliation with one another. I hope you enjoy it. Kind Regards. Mark Barkley