Why The Sister Moons Swallowed Rage
Logline
Sabienn Feel is on a quest to seek an occult stone which for the one who holds it a winning edge for war is given. To gain a clue to its whereabouts he has ventured to Turrland to seek a book owned by a mysterious monk. But all is not well with his brothers who travel with him. And one brother will die.
Genre
Action, Adventure, Epic, Fantasy,,Adventure,Epic,Fantasy
Short Summary
Sabienn Feel enters Turrland to seek a book owned by a mysterious monk at a monastery called Seahawk. Their journey takes them to another monastery where his brother Bray, after falling in love, is swept away by a river. Sabienn and his other brothers go on to Seahawk where a blood bath is brewing.
Sabienn averts bloodshed at Seahawk by putting in place a property transaction. He is then feted by a rich Turr and is invited to a feast. At the feast he finds Bray being offered to be butchered in a ceremony. He releases Bray and goes back to Seahawk. A showdown takes place with his Father.
Setting
Turrland on the Planet Whee
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Quest
Plot - Other Elements
Philosophical Questions, Twist
Mature Audience Themes
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Main Character Details
Name: Sabienn Feel
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Decisive, Extraordinary Powers and Abilities, Leader, Manipulative, Adventurous, Complex,Adventurous,Complex,Leader,Manipulative
Additional Character Details
Name: Braylenn Skenn (Bray)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: Logical
Key Traits: Adventurous, Confident, Educated, Extraordinary Powers and Abilities, Faithful, Outspoken, Strong Moral Code,Complex,Confident,Educated,Faithful,Outspoken
Additional Character Details
Name: Storkinn Keel (Stork)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: skeptic
Key Traits: Adventurous, Blunt, Complex, Extraordinary Powers and Abilities, Faithful, Funny, Sarcastic,Complex,Blunt,Funny,Sarcastic,Faithful
Additional Character Details
Name: Dippin Trayne (Deep)
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Role: emotional
Key Traits: Strong Moral Code, Adventurous, Complex, Educated, Faithful, Honorable, Patriotic, Selfless, Extraordinary Powers and Abilities, Gracious, Skillful,Adventurous,Complex,Faithful,Educated
Development Pitch
This would make a great film as it is about the underdog. Four men are rendered freaks when they grew wings in keeping with a native legend, only to find it a calling to save the planet Whee on which they reside. The images have a cinematic style and the expression of their emotions is done with funny, pointed and often moving dialogue. It is largely through their speech that their feelings are laid bare. The scenes span wide time periods through the device of Sabienn's ability to be able to 'read' an object in his hand. The story is always moving forward but the flashes to the past fill the pages with back-story. Sabienn Feel is a leader but troubled with his own inadequacies. He is loyal to his three brothers and seeks to kill his Father who killed two hundred women, four of whom were the four men's mothers. The map of Whee where all the action takes place is enclosed with this submission. This series of books is mainly aimed at despondent and restless young teenage men. Kind Regards. Mark Barkley