FALLOUT

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ACTION CRIME DETECTIVE DRAMA MYSTERY

Contemporary

ROBERT E MARIER

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Submision Type

book

Logline

Successful businesses become desperate from COVID closures and face financial ruin. When they are offered untraceable cash to do a killing some reluctantly agree. The lack of clues and motives frustrate the FBI task force who cross the country trying to solve the puzzling case. Engaging plot twists.

Genre

Action,Crime,Detective,Drama,Mystery

Short Summary

Older restaurant owner in trouble receives an offer of $500M to kill an innocent man. Eventually 8 other identical killings were identified. Puzzling story-turns lead the FBI astray and confused. With the perpetrators on the run to escape capture in Puerto Rico, a plane crash complicates things

Setting

Tampa , Naples and Jacksonville FL. Reno, Sacramento and the Cayman Islands

Based on a True Story

No

Plot - Premise

Overcoming Monster/Villain

Plot - Other Elements

Meaningful Message,Twist

Mature Audience Themes

Information not completed

Main Character Details

Name: Harry Knight, FBI agent in charge

Age: 57-60

Gender: Male

Role: Protagonist

Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Confident,Empathetic,Flexible,Engaging,Educated,Leader,Honorable,Masculine,Modest

Additional Character Details

Name: John Ellis

Age: 40

Gender: Male

Role: Logical

Key Traits: Confident,Faithful,Educated,Honorable,Unapologetic,Masculine,Modest,Complex,Skillful

Additional Character Details

Name: Sara Barnard

Age: 35

Gender: Female

Role: sidekick

Key Traits: Aspiring,Charming,Confident,Decisive,Gracious

Additional Character Details

Name: Sydney Snider

Age: 68

Gender: Male

Role: emotional

Key Traits: Complex,Desperate,Engaging,Greedy,Modest,Secretive,Lone Wolf,Naive

About The Author

Author Bio Robert Marier grew up in Maine and attended Kennebunk schools and Lawrence Academy in Groton Massachusetts before graduating from Colby College. His business career involved real estate sales and particularly land development where he became the first creator of condominium style retirement communities and ocean front high- end projects in Northern New England. Bob’s life-long passion has been golf. He was a low-handicap player until recent years and won multiple club championships and other titles. In his retirement he has pursued his love of music and songwriting and created two CDs of his original songs. They are available online as “MELODIES FROM MAINE.” His interest in private flying culminated with him receiving his instrument rating at the age of 69. In recent years he has discovered an outlet for his creativity by writing two novels, TIDAL POOLS, A mystery that takes place in coastal Maine and PERFECT FAIRWAYS-HIDDEN LIES a murder mystery set in the world of professional golf. Both are available in Amazon as is his latest novel, FALLOUT, a unique fictional story about the effect of the Covid-19 pandemic. He is married to writer Valerie Marier and has four children and four grand children. He and Valerie live in Southern Maine.

Target Audiences

Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+

Target Gender: Universal

Group Specific

Information not completed

Publishing Details

Status: Yes: self-published

Publisher: ROBERT E MARIER

Year Published: 2021

Hard Copy Available

No

ISBN

ISBN. 978-0-578-95326=7

Genre

ACTION

Brief

An agent discovers similarities in some deaths that occurred in different American states. He begins the investigation and comes up with a few culprits, including salespeople, desperate for their failed business on behalf of COVID 19, who ended up joining a criminal scheme.

Overall Rating

GOOD

Point of View

THIRD PERSON

Narrative Elements

Authors Writing Style: GOOD

Characterization: FAIR

Commerciality: GOOD

Franchise Potential: FAIR

Pace: GOOD

Premise: GOOD

Structure: GOOD

Theme: GOOD

Accuracy of Book Profile

It is accurate.

Draw of Story

It is a story that takes place during the COVID pandemic, but it is not about the pandemic itself. It's about the effects of the pandemic on the activities of small businesses. It has an interesting beginning as it places us in the core of families going through financial problems because of the pandemic. Afterward, we get to know these men, who accept a criminal deal out of desperation.

Possible Drawbacks

The plot is very dynamic, but the part of the investigation in which the agent visits some witnesses ends up becoming a bit repetitive, as most of the victims' colleagues have the same thing to say.

Use of Special Effects

THE STORY DOES NOT RELY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

Primary Hook of Story

Understanding what a man is capable of in a desperate situation and the investigation that needs to connect the dots between unrelated victims to find the criminals.

Fanbase Potential

Criminal investigation fans might like the story because the way the author conducts the investigation seems believable and entertaining.

Awards Potential

If the plot focused a little more on the internal conflicts of these men who found themselves desperate for money and ended up committing a crime, perhaps it would have more potential for awards.

Envisioned Budget

MEDIUM BUDGET

Similar Films/TV Series

SEVEN: BECAUSE OF THE CRIMINAL INVESTIGATION THAT SEEKS TO CONNECT THE DOTS BETWEEN CRIMES THAT SEEM INDIVIDUAL BUT HAVE A CONNECTION. THE COMPANY MEN: AN EXECUTIVE WHO LOSES HIS JOB IN A MASS LAYOFF AND STRUGGLES TO SURVIVE DURING THE 2008 CRISIS.

What’s New About the Story

The combination of the crisis resulting from the pandemic with a criminal investigation, very typical of the action genre, makes the story more original.

Lead Characters

Despite the protagonist being active, committed to his job, and wanting to solve the cases, the characters who actually stand out are those men who appear at the beginning, who, out of the desire to help their families, end up entering the world of crime.

Uniqueness of Story

It's not a rare gem, as this is a traditional police investigation. However, the crisis originated by the pandemic as a starting point for some conflicts turns out to be somewhat original for this genre.

Possible Formats

Film: Studio, Streaming TV Series: Limited Run / Mini-Series

Analyst Recommendation

CONSIDER

Justification

Despite being a typical investigation story within the action genre, the drama found at the beginning brings an attractive drama. Seeing these people desperate for the failures caused by the pandemic, and having to keep their families and their businesses alive, is an excellent starting point. It's even more tragic to see that cruel personalities can push these people even further into the deep end by exchanging money for murder. The choice of these men to commit the crime - and suffer eternally from that guilt - in order to protect their families is an intense, breathtaking, engaging start. The investigation itself ends up falling to a more common level, but the protagonist itself and the actions chosen by the author are good to follow. It is the typical entertainment produced by action movies. The author tries to keep a realistic police action, and at the same time, he creates intense scenes, such as the police trying to stop the plane. Seeing that one of those men committed suicide because of his guilt and another went mad and is in an asylum brings even more drama to the plot. There is humanity in these "criminals." And after all, who are the real criminals here? Those men who desperately try to save their sons or those criminal masterminds aiming to earn millions on insurance by destroying other people's lives. It reminds me of the show Squid Game, in which people are capable of everything to make money and help themselves and others. Certainly, both committed crimes, but the book raises this question properly. The story needs a certain polish in structure and also requires more character development to make the protagonist stand out. We could also follow the life stories of those men in parallel, instead of just sticking to the investigation, thus creating a harmonious product of drama and action.