Alien Busters

Safa Shaqsy

Book Cover

GENRE

ACTION ADVENTURE APOCALYPTIC FUNNY YOUNG ADULT SCI-FI

    Core Theme

    MAN'S SURVIVAL AT ALL COSTS EVEN IF IT MEANS BLITHELY DESTROYING INTELLIGENT LIFE.

    TIME PERIOD

    Future

    COMPARABLE TITLES

    STARSHIP TROOPERS

    CHARACTER LIST

    NAT: 16-17. LEAD. BRAVE, CURIOUS, EMOTIONAL, AND SMART.

    ANDIE: 16-17. NAT'S BEST FRIEND WHO IS HELPFUL AND HAS HER BACK.

    KRAIG: 16-17 HER OTHER BEST FRIEND WHO'S A LITTLE LESS LEVEL-HEADED

    GALE: 20-40S. THEIR ANGRY BOSS WHO SUPPORTS THEM BUT HIS HANDS ARE TIED.

    KATHLEEN: TEEN-20S. ONE OF THE LEADERS OF THE OUTPOST COMMUNITY WHERE NAT FINS REFUGE AND HELP IN HER QUEST.

    SUZANNE: 20S-60S. A SCIENTIST WHO HAS EXPERIMENTED ON ALIENS LIKE NAT'S PARENTS DID.

    Logline

    Nathalie is an Alien Buster, a member of a team that kills aliens in the Adkad City on Planet Zelea- home for humans after Earth's destruction. While on a mission, she discovers an alien baby. How can she kill this enemy when she's formed a strong attachment, even if it's forbidden?

    Target Audiences

    Age: 13-17,18-34,35-54,55+

    Target Gender: Universal

    Setting

    outer space on another planet

    Based on a True Story

    No

    Publishing Details

    Status: Yes: self-published

    Publisher: Safa Shaqsy

    Year Published: 2016

    Starting Description

    Nathalie is hunting aliens on planet Zelea and finds a baby alien and she was about to kill the alien. But her heart didn't let her to kill the alien, because she thought the baby alien won't harm her so she kept it a secret and alive. She kept her secret alien in her house away.

    Ending Description

    Nathalie and her two friends run away from the bad alien, and survive, because the bad alien caught them once, but they run far away from it.

    Group Specific

    Information not completed

    Hard Copy Available

    No

    ISBN

    Information not completed

    Mature Audience Themes

    Extreme Violence

    Plot - Other Elements

    Coming of Age,Happy Ending,Meaningful Message,Philosophical Questions,Twist,Other

    Plot - Premise

    Overcoming Monster/Villain,Quest,Other

    Main Character Details

    Name: Nathalie

    Age: 16 or 17

    Gender: Female

    Role: Protagonist

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Badass,Charming,Complex,Confident,Empathetic,Selfless,Outspoken,Faithful,Heroic,Unapologetic,Strong Moral Code,Funny

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Kraig

    Age: 16 or 17

    Gender: Male

    Role: Sidekick

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Badass,Charming,Masculine

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Andie

    Age: 16 or 17

    Gender: Male

    Role: sidekick

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Aspiring,Charming,Crazy,Confident,Masculine

    Additional Character Details

    Name: Kraig

    Age: 16 or 17

    Gender: Male

    Role: sidekick

    Key Traits: Adventurous,Badass,Masculine

    Genre

    ACTION, SUSPENSE, DRAMA, WAR, FANTASY

    Brief

    On planet Zelea, Nat, an alien hunter, has adopted an alien baby which is forbidden since her city is at war with aliens. Because of her parents' research, she believes there is more to the aliens, and they all aren't murdering beasts and wants to prove this to her company, Alien Busters. She finds a data chip with information on all of the alien species. After visiting an outpost of people living in the desert, she finds out there's a city where aliens and humans live in harmony. Ever protective of her baby alien pet, she embarks on a quest to find out the truth about her parents' research and different alien species.

    Overall Rating

    FAIR

    Point of View

    THIRD PERSON

    Narrative Elements

    Authors Writing Style: FAIR

    Characterization: FAIR

    Commerciality: GOOD

    Franchise Potential: EXCELLENT

    Pace: GOOD

    Premise: EXCELLENT

    Structure: FAIR

    Theme: GOOD

    Accuracy of Book Profile

    It needs more details in the later half of the story that explain why Nat is risking everything. She adopts a baby alien, but what is spurring her on to try and clear her parents' names and their research, and what is causing her to put herself and her friends in mortal danger again and again? Need more detail in the second half.

    Draw of Story

    The prospect of humans trying to survive in a hostile alien world.

    Possible Drawbacks

    No.

    Use of Special Effects

    THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS

    Primary Hook of Story

    Humans vs. aliens for planetary survival

    Fanbase Potential

    Yes

    Awards Potential

    No

    Envisioned Budget

    LARGE BUDGET

    Similar Films/TV Series

    STARSHIP TROOPERS

    What’s New About the Story

    It's originality stems from the protagonists' desire to find common ground with what at first seem like aliens who are bent on humankind's destruction. Not many stories look for humanity in the attacking aliens.

    Lead Characters

    Curious, Brave, Smart, Resilient.

    Uniqueness of Story

    No. It seems to only be a first act. Just when they discover things that would propel them into real action, the book ends.

    Possible Formats

    Film: Studio, Streaming

    Analyst Recommendation

    WORK IN PROGRESS

    Justification

    It ends abruptly, before any of their knowledge can be used to change their world.

    Tips for Improvement

    A second and third act.

    Brief

    On planet Zelea, Nat, an alien hunter, has adopted an alien baby which is forbidden since her city is at war with aliens. Because of her parents' research, she believes there is more to the aliens, and they all aren't murdering beasts and wants to prove this to her company, Alien Busters. She finds a data chip with information on all of the alien species. After visiting an outpost of people living in the desert, she finds out there's a city where aliens and humans live in harmony. Ever protective of her baby alien pet, she embarks on a quest to find out the truth about her parents' research and different alien species.

    What We Liked

    Earth was uninhabitable so humans moved to a new planet - infested with different species of deadly aliens. Alien Busters are charged with killing them all, but one girl finds that they may not all be hostile and has to convince a government that won't listen. With the help of her two friends and her cute new alien pet, she embarks on a quest to find friendly, smart aliens - and end the bloodshed on both sides.

    With lots of cool special effects that have worked so well in so many epic movies about aliens, this would be cool to watch. When it's kids who are the protagonists, it's even more exciting and the settings - another planet infested with aliens - is as fun as it gets. The battles are exciting as are the different species of aliens in this big world. Juxtaposed with personal relationships between the kids while they perform their very adult duties, it's an adventure that will reward viewers and bring people to theaters (or streaming services).

    Key points:
    Aliens; Kids fighting aliens; A new planet; Stupid, selfish adults who don't get it; Epic battles between humans and aliens.

    Synopsis

    Nat (Nathalie) is killing aliens on the planet Zelea, where people went after Earth was destroyed. Her friends Kraig and Andie communicate with her and report on alien corpses. They are part of Alien Busters and their mission is to destroy all aliens. The alien corpses they find look like they’ve been fed on by other predator aliens. Nat’s parents did the same job but thought the aliens might have been more advanced than popular opinion, yet they were killed by them. Nat sees a baby alien near its dead mother and is ordered to kill it but she lies. She takes the little purring thing and puts it into her backpack and goes back to the flying cars that will take them to Adkad City. She takes the alien to her home and feeds it cereal, then she watches one of her parents’ videos about their research into saving aliens. Andie comes over to console her about the boss yelling at her. Andie finds the baby alien and tries to kill it until Nat convinces him not to, telling him that her parents believed that there are more to the aliens.

    She names the alien Star and dresses it up in a disguise and takes him to buy pet food. Back home, she watches another video where her parents are doing something she can’t really see with a dangerous alien. She cries, and Star seems to sense her pain and consoles her by cuddling. Nat vows to find out what really happened to both of their parents. On her next mission, a colleague named Pam climbs a strange tree and falls to her death after flying aliens come out. They kill another person, and Nat and Andie hide in a strange cave where they discover alien eggs. Andie says they’ll be heroes for their discovery but Nat talks him out of killing the defenseless babies. Back at headquarters, Gale is angry at them again, but they talk their way out of it since Gale was supposed to be reachable and save them. Gale tells them they will be investigated further.

    Back home, she bonds with Star then puts him in the garage when Andie and Kraig come over. She convinces them to help her find out what’s really going on with Alien Busters, citing her parents’ theories. They stay over. She gets up in the middle of the night to feed Star in secret. The next day at their interrogation, a professor named Suzanne tells Nat she knew her parents and their theories. Gale knows about the alien eggs, and Kraig is pissed he was kept in the dark by his two best friends. During her interrogation, Nat convinces the panel that she lied about the eggs because she thought the aliens' parents would take revenge on humans and they buy her lie. They get suspended for a week pending the panel’s further investigation. Suzanne calls her into her office and wants to tell her about her research but there are cameras in there. She goes home and gets a message from her father that leads her to one of her mother’s rings that has a storage chip hidden in it. It shows every species of alien on the planet and challenges her to find out the truth about the aliens. She goes to Andie’s and he takes them for a car ride into dangerous territory that Nat wanted to explore. Andie plays fetch with Star and they find the dead body of a farmer with four claw marks on his body - like the dangerous aliens in her mom’s files have. The report of an alien killing a human makes the news.

    Kat goes to Suzanne and shows her the chip she found. Suzanne shows her a secret lab where she and Kat’s parents used to experiment on dead aliens. Gale knows about it. Kat lets her have the chip. They go on another exploration of the outer regions of town and find a rock that is cracked and glowing from within. They bring it back and Star bites it open and a red light comes out and Star floats and says his name. They are all stunned. Kraig freaks out and leaves. She takes the rock to Suzanne and they find a hologram with plans for a spaceship. Suzanne says aliens are intellectual and asks to see Star for tests, but Nat refuses.

    Nat, Andie and Kraig go back into the desert with the rock that leads them to a cloaked alien spaceship. An alien called an Exo comes from inside and captures them - and knocks them out. They wake up in the desert with no shoes and weird markings on their wrists. Then, some other aliens surround them but a group of humans kill the aliens. Nat meets Kathleen and Burl, who says they are in the Gone Desert, a dangerous place. They go to their outpost, called the community, where there are lots of other humans living. They are shocked to hear the trio encountered an Exo, who are the most intelligent and dangerous species. They are shown a man named Jarrett who encountered an Exo and was tortured and now barely speaks. A doctor finds a piece of metal embedded in their wrists and says he’ll have to research this. The trio wants to leave but the others tell them to stay - the thing in their hand could be dangerous. Jarrett greets Nat then turns and walks away. She follows, and makes him tell her about the Exo - and he says nothing happened to his wrist - but some things happened that can’t be seen. Kraig volunteers to have the doctor, Harris, operate on his wrist - so they all agree to stay long even though Nat is worried about Star. Nat has a feeling her parents were here and asks Burl who can’t find them in his computer. Jarrett and Nat bond over both being orphaned and talk about their parents. Harris says he’ll take out their metal implants in an hour after he can study Kraig’s, which has threads that grew into his blood vessels. Jarrett catches the trio trying to look into the archives, but says he won’t tell on them, then he takes them to his favorite place with trees that move. Nat and Andie get their wrist implants removed then they’re all driven home.

    At their follow-up hearings at the Alien Busters offices, Karl and Andie are found innocent but Nat is found guilty - which means they’ll search her house. She freaks out and takes Star and starts walking to the Gone Desert to hide out in the community. She runs into Renee, who’s left her city called Nerva City, where people and some alien species live in harmony. Nat can’t believe it. They finally get picked up by car with Jarrett in it, but he’s not particularly friendly today. At the community, Harris tells her that the metal implant is a tracking device so they can use the humans’ codes to get into the city. They’re probably planning an attack. It’s way beyond human technology. Nat talks to Jarrett, who is offended that she never said goodbye from the last trip - but they mend their friendship when she explains why she had to leave so fast.

    About The Author

    Safa Shaqsy is an author of the bestselling book, Alien Busters series. She graduated from a business college but participated in many writing activities including writing her own stories and poems as she expressed herself through words. Her love for novels started when she got a novel as a gift, that's when she discovered the magic of the fiction world.