Timberwolf
GENRE
ACTION ADVENTURE DRAMA EPIC POLITICAL SCI-FI APOCALYPTIC
Core Theme
MAN V. HIMSELF - MAKE SURE YOU'RE READY TO STARE INTO THE ABYSS.
TIME PERIOD
Future
COMPARABLE TITLES
RIDDICK, STAR TREK: WRATH OF KHAN
CHARACTER LIST
TIMBERWOLF: 41, LEAD. BADASS, NEARLY SUPERHUMAN, DECISIVE, SECULAR, MASCULINE, COMPLEX.
GRAY: 65. THE GREEDY, NARCISSISTIC FORMER SOLDIER FRIEND OF TIMBERWOLF.
SALLA: 25. A PILOT WHO IS ON TIMBERWOLF'S MIND SINCE THEY ENCOUNTERED EACH OTHER IN A PREVIOUS WAR.
CARDINAL JACOB: 40S-70S. HEAD OF THE RELIGIOUS ORDER OF THE DAY, HE'S INTERESTED IN THE TRILLION-PLUS DOLLARS WORTH OF TREASURE IN THE MOUNTAIN THEY ALL END UP ON.
Logline
Timberwolf Velez was a top black ops agent - until he met a psychic alien spider that tore up his mind… and left a piece of itself behind. Now a madman has found a trove of devastating weapons. Will our damaged hero be able to stop the galaxy from descending into endless war?
Target Audiences
Age: 18-34,35-54,55+
Target Gender: Male Leaning,Female Leaning
Setting
Various space stations, alien worlds, interstellar ships and ancient abandoned places.
Based on a True Story
No
Publishing Details
Status: Yes: with a Publisher
Publisher: The Zharmae Publishing Press (Note - publisher went under. Rights have reverted to author)
Year Published: 2015
Starting Description
Timberwolf's in bad shape. Suffering from exposure to Kizik - a psychic mind-bending alien spider. Will his handler flush him into the black? Or send him off to stop his former mentor, Emmanuel Gray - who has just discovered the location of Highland, a shangri-la of a weapons factory?
Ending Description
As alien armies face off, Timberwolf is locked in a battle of wills with Gray in Highland's command center. The AI offers Gray his prize - but only if Timber agrees. Timber denies Gray and confronts Kizik instead - and the alien releases his mind! Timber traps Gray, but will he escape?
Group Specific
Information not completed
Hard Copy Available
Yes
ISBN
978-1-549619-89-2
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Plot - Other Elements
Philosophical Questions,Twist
Plot - Premise
Overcoming Monster/Villain,Voyage and Return,Internal Journey/Rebirth
Main Character Details
Name: Timberwolf Velez
Age: 41
Gender: Male
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Badass,Aggressive,Decisive,Complex,Blunt,Skillful,Lone Wolf,Secretive,Sarcastic,Masculine
Additional Character Details
Name: Emmanuel Gray
Age: 65
Gender: Male
Role: Antagonist
Key Traits: Badass,Aggressive,Charming,Complex,Confident,Crazy,Desperate,Greedy,Educated,Insecure,Leader,Masculine,Villainous,Narcisstic,Religious,Power Hungry,Outspoken,Skillful,Visionary,Manipulative,Unapologetic
Additional Character Details
Name: Salla Birdwing
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Role: sidekick
Key Traits: Adventurous,Aspiring,Empathetic,Engaging,Faithful,Honorable,Naive,Selfless,Skillful,Sarcastic,Strong Moral Code
Additional Character Details
Name: Dr. Thea Tier
Age: 48
Gender: Female
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Complex,Confident,Crazy,Criminal,Decisive,Educated,Leader,Villainous,Skillful,Secretive,Unapologetic
Genre
WAR, FANTASY, ACTION
Brief
Timberwolf survived an encounter with the mind entering Arnock, but still felt connect. General Gray is a religious zealot who has annihilated alien races in the name of God. Kizik, the Arnock general, wants to restore his people back to their home and uses his connection with Timberwolf to aid his cause. The treasure trove of the Highlands has the wealth of the many world Earth has conquered.
Overall Rating
GOOD
Narrative Elements
Authors Writing Style: EXCELLENT
Characterization: GOOD
Commerciality: GOOD
Franchise Potential: GOOD
Pace: GOOD
Premise: GOOD
Structure: GOOD
Theme: GOOD
Accuracy of Book Profile
Yes, the book profile accurately reflects the book.
Draw of Story
The story is science fiction and has rich world building. Earth has gone out into the universe, finding life and destroying it. There is also driven by a staunch religious sect that believes aliens are an abomination since humans are made in His image. It has a interesting twist on a humans versus aliens story.
Possible Drawbacks
The story is well rounded and entertaining. There are many gray areas with different sides to the stories. There could be more female representation as well as people of color. There was not much that made me want to put the book down.
Use of Special Effects
THE STORY RELIES HEAVILY ON SPECIAL EFFECTS
Primary Hook of Story
The hook is that Gray is leading Earth in another attack on Arnock, a race of alien spiders that were the only aliens to defeat Earth. Timberwolf is mentally linked with them after a battle and resistance is building to fight against Earth's tyranny.
Fanbase Potential
This could have a large fanbase. It is a very in-depth and immersive science fiction story. There is action, adventure, multiple alien species, space travel and a religious zealot as the antagonist. It has great world building that can open up for more stories.
Awards Potential
This could have awards potential for cinematography, special effects and acting. The role of Gray, a staunch Believer who uses the name of God to massacre entire species, could be an amazing opportunity for the right actor. With new worlds and species to explore, there room for creative cinematography and art design.
Envisioned Budget
LARGE BUDGET
Similar Films/TV Series
RAISED BY WOLVES, EDGE OF TOMORROW, STAR TREK
What’s New About the Story
The story is original because aliens are not trying to exterminate the human species, humans are going through the universe massacring other species. It is all helmed by the church that has a hold on Earth much like it did during the Crusades. Humans are the antagonist in this story which is a fun perspective. There should be more female representation and people of color in a future world.
Lead Characters
Gray is a very interesting character because he basically a warrior priest, spreading the gospel and massacring alien species to the glory of God. His commitment seems psychotic and overzealous but the audience is drawn to him.
Uniqueness of Story
This not a rare gem but a well written science fiction story that has distinction from others in the genre, especially those on screen.
Possible Formats
Film: Studio, Streaming TV Series: Streaming, Cable
Analyst Recommendation
RECOMMEND
Justification
This is a recommend because of the rich world building. There is a different perspective on humanity and its role in the universe. It is not a black and white action story. There are perspectives of all the involved groups, including the Arnock's - who are supposed to be the enemy. There is room for expanding and continuing the story. This has something for everyone: action, aliens, space travel. It would translate well on screen.
Brief
Timberwolf Velez was a top black ops agent - until he met a psychic alien spider that tore up his mind… and left a piece of itself behind. Now a madman has found a trove of devastating weapons. Will our damaged hero be able to stop the galaxy from descending into endless war?
What We Liked
Besides the non-stop sci-fi action, the characters are all top-notch. Allegiances change, and they're all after a big prize. The lead is a certified "badass" and he's up against formidable opponents - including a race of intelligent spider-like creatures with psychic abilities. His journey is hard, with plenty of obstacles. The sci-fi concepts are very well-done and it's never boring.
Film: Amazing visual potential and characters which actors would love to portray. The plot moves quickly, and there are plenty of twists and turns. The lead is likeable and formidable, and the many antagonists provide excellent fodder. It's a very interesting story to keep one hooked.
TV: There is a lot of great story here. It can easily be re-imagined as a limited TV series. There are tons of cliffhangers and great characters with interesting agendas. The plot moves along at a great clip and there are plenty of meaty roles for top actors. Also, very cool VFX elements for excellent visuals throughout.
Key points:
Action
Great sci-fi plot
Formidable protagonists and antagonists
Sci-fi creatures
Amazing visuals
Synopsis
Timberwolf is already on to his next battle, and the last one ended up with an intelligent spider-alien infiltrating his brain. He's given special high-tech super armor and expected to follow the machinations of religious-bent and shady superiors, most of whom wish him dead. Lead by Cardinal Jacobs and soldier-turned-bishop Emmanuel Gray, they're all after a place called Highland.
Nothing less than the abolishment of peace is at stake as different factions try and infiltrate Highland, which has over a trillion in treasure. The military, a religious militia group, and alien warriors - with varying allegiances - are what he's up against to prevent all-out war from happening again.
Timberwolf ends up in Highland, battling his former friend/now nemesis Gray, and the mercenaries of man and alien they've both emassed. He has to kill the alien spider and get it out of his mind and save his brother. In a great battle on Highland, some of these he accomplishes - but some he doesn't - leaving room for a sequel.