THE CAPTAIN'S COLLIE
ACTION DRAMA FAMILY MYSTERY HISTORICAL FICTION SUSPENSE/THRILLER
1940s & '50s
ACE MASK
Logline
A young girl whose mother is killed in the German Blitz of WWII is evacuated to the English countryside estate of a shadowy recluse. She finds comfort in a gallant collie who helps her unlock a curious secret, and together they come face to face with a diabolical enemy and the terror of war.
Genre
Action,Drama,Family,Mystery,Historical Fiction,Suspense/Thriller
Short Summary
After a bombing mission, a German aircraft crash lands in a dark forest. We are then introduced to an 11 year-old girl who is delivered to a countryside estate, ruled over by a mysterious recluse and unfriendly staff. On her first night alone she receives a late night visit from a friendly collie.
When a diabolical German officer, who has been in hiding, is being rescued by his comrades, he takes the young girl as a hostage. With the aid of the collie she has befriended, the girl must make good her escape. The story concludes with the young girl having to be separated from the dog she loves.
Setting
RURAL ENGLAND
Based on a True Story
No
Plot - Premise
Overcoming Monster/Villain,Other
Plot - Other Elements
Meaningful Message,Coming of Age,Other
Mature Audience Themes
Information not completed
Main Character Details
Name: ALICE
Age: 11
Gender: Female
Role: Protagonist
Key Traits: Adventurous,Charming,Complex,Decisive,Empathetic,Heroic,Educated,Selfless,Outspoken
Additional Character Details
Name: Captain Bramwell
Age: 55+
Gender: Male
Role: Emotional
Key Traits: Complex,Empathetic,Educated,Honorable,Secretive,Lone Wolf
Additional Character Details
Name: MRS THORNDIKE
Age: 55+
Gender: Female
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Aggressive,Villainous,Blunt,Outspoken,Sarcastic,Unapologetic
Additional Character Details
Name: MAJOR RICHTER
Age: 35+
Gender: Male
Role: antagonist
Key Traits: Aggressive,Confident,Desperate,Villainous,Power Hungry
Development Pitch
This is a story written in the vein of an episode of MASTERPIECE THEATRE. Though the central characters consist of a precocious young girl and a collie, the story also tells of a reclusive army captain, badly wounded in the first world war, who has hidden himself from the outside world. At first introduced as a frightening character, his only companion is a collie, which serves as the thread that holds the story and some of its characters together. Thanks to the dog, the Captain eventually bonds with the girl. A diabolical German officer, stranded in a nearby forest and waiting for an imminent rescue, is a dreadful threat to the lives of all the characters in the story. The narrative avoids the cliche of a dog dying at the climax but nevertheless does have a tearful ending in which the girl must leave behind the collie who has made such a difference in her life.